I had another tutorial with another tutor, to see how my animation was looking at this time, and the feedback was that my animation didn’t flow and tell a story as well as it should, both myself and my tutor liked the school aspect of the animation so I was advised to start off with a school setting and tell the story of the movement through that to give a sense of where the movement all started which was in High School.
Reflecting from this, I learnt how important it is to have a flow to a story and also to have a good starting point for the animation to start from, which will attract the viewers but also tell the story more clearly and effective.
