Tutorial with David

I had a tutorial with David to discuss about my work as I wasn’t 100% happy with my work.

The feedback  was that he liked the activist aspect more than the glas which I agree is much stronger, liked the diagonal aspect within the background as it created dimension and that I needed to implement more. I had too many ideas going as I was trying to please each tutor and I myself wasn’t even 100% with my own product.

From this I am going to strip back and change the colour to pink and purple linking in with the barbie top and also creating the diagonal shaping, body text needs to be block. Scrapping the glasses and going with the more activist role by using placards to show both sides. I will re think and and do some design development using this feedback.