After having a tutorial with Ian about what my current book cover design, I received some feedback on how I could improve it. There was only slight changes I had to make to the book cover like having a line break, moving the title down slightly, remove a few things etc. This is the final outcome, I wanted to show the light and darkness of Williams life, and how he is walking away from the War, chaos and his abusive mother into Mr Toms life where this side is a lot lighter and inviting showing the contrast of both sides bu using similar colour tones to show this. Having these tutorials I find are very helpful to my working practice as it enables me to see what my lecturer is talking about and how I can improve upon this.
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