With the tutorial with David, we all presented out strong concept again to showcase what concept we chose and what we have done so far but to also get further feedback from a graphic design point of view.
I explained about what Maris said about how I could out the gold in context and he suggested I do the Kintsugi technique myself and print out photos and create the ‘cracks’ myself as it would look more authentic and realistic touch to the visuals. I also asked about the typeface as I wasn’t sure it worked well with the imagery and he said that I didn’t want a typeface that would compete with the visuals as these are quite strong by themselves.
So taking this feedback forward I will make the amendments needed to strengthen my outcomes even further to create stronger and more striking outcomes.
Having this tutorial was definitely helpful as I found having someone new who hasn’t seen my work quite helpful as it brings another set of eyes in and also helps solves problems I have and could encounter.
my learning journal 