I decided to go with this outcome for the Penguin project as I felt it was the strongest outcome of them all.
Feedback from tutorial
We all had a group tutorial where we would receive feedback from our tutors.
My feedback:
- The typeface I created is very strong and works well.
- Colours are good, will catch the readers attention.
- I need to be more ambitious with my ideas.
- The silhouette is overused and common
- Can not tell that the book is about Talking Turkeys
- Because I’ve gone with the Caribbean heritage, I could combine this with the clothing like a shirt and implement a pattern within this,
- Stick with the typeface as it is strong and be more experimental
When I develop this further, I will most certainly take the feedback forward to create a stronger piece.
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