For the formative feedback, I had to showcase what I have currently produced so far to my tutor Carol to get feedback on how I could improve on these outcomes even further. I did have feedback from David two days prior to having my formative feedback so I tried to make as many changes as I could in that time before the formative deadline.
Feedback given from Carol
Scrum Caps – state about speculative design, make sure I state this in my blogs.
Carol suggested I create posters for medics/ME for concussion in domestic level, what to look for, how, why etc.
Possibly creating a moving image which would convey the message of my project.
Receiving feedback is very useful for myself as it gives me the opportunity to present my ideas to my tutors and receive feedback to improve upon these even further. This gives me the opportunity to take a step and see what the tutors are discussing and from this further developing my outcomes even further to create a stronger more developed visual.
my learning journal 