I had tutorial today with David to discuss about what I have done open till this point and to get feedback on what I can further improve on for the formative assessment feedback.
Scrum cap – show in context, showing a before and after
I was not sure if I should use one primary colour or using a mixture of two, green and pink but David suggested that I go with using both colours as it works quite well.
In my booklet, specifically the quote page – David suggested that I experiment him over the hierarchy
on the last page of the booklet David suggested taking out the hand visuals I drew, as it gives a different message than the other pages do.
Cards – the noise called, doesn’t really work, David suggested experimenting more with type and optical illusions together
David also suggested that I create a brand identity for this final major project, suggested that I think of a name and a logo to tie things all together which will make things more cohesive in the long run.
Having tutorials are quite helpful for development of current ideas, as it gives another person’s viewpoint and what possible aspects they think does and does not work as a whole.
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