I had a tutorial today with David to discuss what I have currently produced and how I can further develop my work before the submission. I showcased my booklet, poster, and cards to David to see what I can develop an even further which is vital.
The advice I was given was:
BOOKLET
Line break on some of the body copy text – needs to be changed
Quote page – produce point size on the less important text to create more hierarchy
Motor Neurone Disease page – instead of having move to neuron disease distorted, possibly changed us to the symptoms of motor neuron disease and distort that
Imagery of players – change that to match the colour palette and also changed the point size of less important information on the quotes
POSTERS
Look at the link a David has sent me, to fit develop my posters to get a better sense of hierarchy
CARDS
Experiment with the percentages – changing the opacity to match the percentages in the statistics
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