Feedback from Criticality Project

• Feedback I received from Theo and Carol regarding my Criticality – Blood Diamond Project.
• Jewelry packaging – they like – BESPOKE?
• Could the editorial go with the packaging as it doesn’t work as well as an individual price
• Where would this go? – Gallery? Product Protest? Packet through a letter box? Pack?
• Logo – looks like an egg and needs refining
• Surrealist? – Dream turned into a nightmare? – Specify what the project is about? (Design Document)

Taking the feedback forward, I will develop all aspects mentioned by my tutors to create a more cohesive and refined outcome. The logo is mainly the part I need to focus on.