Further Development

I decided to do even further ideation development as I still was not completely happy with my previous ideas. I decided to stick to a more structured, more professional layout, and this could then be placed in other businesses etc. I still added a few contemporary components through out but still keep the editorial quite professional which is vital.

When looking at my previous ideas, I noticed hierarchy was the one thing I was missing through out, so to rectify this, I will ensure this is carried out throughout by experimenting with line weight and point size to highlight keywords and key pieces of information.

Developed Ideation

I wanted to do more development of my initial ideas for my dissertation as tutorial, eyes I am struggling creatively to create the editorial digitally as I am finding but one idea isn’t really working as well as I would have liked. So, to rectify this, I went back into my research and looked over all of the outcomes I looked into and immediately started to get more ideas for my editorial.

In the end, I decided to go with a more business style approach to my editorial as previously mentioned my dissertation is a CERP paper (creative enterprise research proposal), so to ensure these two aspects relate I will be creating a more business style editorial.

From my research I have taken many different aspects such as possible layout designs, grid system and how to highlight important information.

As a graphic designer, development is always an important factor in our design practice as this shows the client where we have started from but also shows how we don’t stick to one initial idea we always have to develop and develop until we create a really strong concept.

Ideation

The research I previously carried out on the editorials, I have taken inspiration from each outcome and implemented them all into my ideas.

I have taken aspect I just type, creating strong sense of hierarchy by using various weights and point sizes to create a path for the viewer to follow and to create a sense of direction which is crucial when it comes to an editorial.

I experimented with layers and decreasing the opacity of visuals and type to create depth and dimension. I have also created some visuals such as a brand logo and some possible ideas for tee shirt designs, this will tie the brand and the editorial together as I can showcase this throughout the editorial which will give the viewer a sneak peak of what my brand is about and how I have researched into the business side of things which makes things more personal as it gives the viewer an insight into my thought process.

The research I previously carried out on the editorials, I have taken inspiration from each outcome and implemented them all into my ideas.

I have taken aspect I just type, creating strong sense of hierarchy by using various weights and point sizes to create a path for the viewer to follow and to create a sense of direction which is crucial when it comes to an editorial.

I experimented with layers and decreasing the opacity of visuals and type to create depth and dimension. I have also created some visuals such as a brand logo and some possible ideas for tee shirt designs, this will tie the brand and the editorial together as I can showcase this throughout the editorial which will give the viewer a sneak peak of what my brand is about and how I have researched into the business side of things which makes things more personal as it gives the viewer an insight into my thought process.

All the imagery used to create my brand logo and visuals are all based on my South African heritage. Engeltjie – is an Afrikaans term, the Protea is the national flower of South Africa and one of my favourite flowers and the springbok is the national animal of South Africa also so I wanted to incorporate these two main pieces as these are quite close to the South African demographic and this is what my target audience is catered to which is the South African demographic.

I also wanted to use quite pastel but also quite earthy colour tones to represent this South African culture as everything we love is to do with the land and its animals. The colour theory is also quite warm toned and inviting for the viewer to read which is quite an important factor because as a graphic designer you need to be able to draw people into to look at your work and also inviting them to carry on reading and or looking at whatever information you were trying to portray.

Dissertation – Editorial Research

For this project, I was asked to create a cover and a 5 double page spread editorial based on my dissertation which was a CERP paper – Creative Enterprise Research Proposal based on creating my own clothing brand.

Put some background information on my creative enterprise research proposal, I based my dissertation on creating my own clothing business looking into many topics such as branding, brand avoidance, advertising, promoting common marketing etc and also looking into the finance side of things I’m creating a business plan. Before I start my ideation process, I carried out some research on editorial design layouts, some of these images are previous students’ outcomes based on their dissertations.

All outcomes are very striking and contemporary with how the visuals are presented and showcased; all colour theories work well specifically to relate to the topic the students chose to base their dissertations on which is important when creating an aesthetic. The hierarchy of the typeface is strong which varies in line weights and point size to create hierarchy of type to showcase important pass information, quotes and to show where the reader should read 1st and so on, using certain accent colours to highlight keywords also works well.

I also researched into a few business editorial outcomes to get a sense of what a business editorial would look like, as my dissertation is based around creating and setting up my own clothing business.

The layouts are quite simplistic but very modern which works quite well to appear very professional which is an important factor. Not overly cluttered with information, good sense of negative space which is something I will take through to my ideation process.

Developed Ideation

From the research I conducted on protest and Caribbean patterns, I developed my outcomes even further based on the feedback I was given to improve my outcome.

I combined the subjects protest and culture together.

I created my own turkey visuals by combining the Caribbean patterns to create something that showcases the Caribbean culture and the authors ethnicity. I played around with various drawing styles and patterns to create these visuals.

I tried using a variety of drawing styles ranging from cartoon, vector, illustrative etc to see what style would work best together with the visuals and typeface and from this I decided to go with the more illustrative approach and this gives a more personal touch to the work.

Protest & Caribbean Pattern Visuals Research

Definition of the term PROTEST

  • A statement or action expressing disapproval of or objection to something
  • A written declaration, typically by a notary public, that a bill has been presented and payment or acceptance refused.
  • Express an objection to what someone has said or done.
  • Declare (something) firmly and emphatically in response to doubt or accusation.

Taking the advice on board I received from David, I decided to look in to protest material to get a better sense of how I could design the Talking Turkeys book cover. The author discusses many topics within his book in poem form and many being about protest and human rights, this will aid myself in the ideation process.

I also looked into the textile materials but specifically Caribbean fabric patterns, as they are known for their bright and adventurous patterns, this creates a sense of individuality amongst them. This was something I was interested about as I could combine both aspects – patters and the turkey to create a Caribbean pattern and this will represent his heritage.

Development & Penguin Feedback

David gave me some feedback on my book cover which will help me further develop and improve the outcome ever further.

  • Use protest material such as placards etc
  • Turkeys visuals, possible on the clothing but using the reggae colours to represent the authors culture?
  • Keep using the typeface as David liked this

Further Development

I decided to develop the booklet end memo card even further as I wasn’t happy with how both turned out, so I decided to look back at my research to get more inspiration, when I was looking at the campaign again, MIND caught my eye with the ripped/ loose visuals, so I took that on board and also a layout possibility which will make the outcomes more readable and cohesive.

Development

Developing these ideas as a part of a graphic designers design process, we need to show the development stages from where we started to where we ended.

I decided to mainly focus on adding more of the rift paper aspect as David mentioned that this design process works quite well previously, as I am trying to reveal message by using this technique.

Decrease in the opacity to show the recovery rates decrease when time passes from 10 minutes to six hours, this is when the risk of long term disabilities increases which is also increase in shock factor which will then lead to people reacting more quickly when a stroke occurs.

I decided to change from a leaflet to a booklet as I was struggling to fit all the information I need to add, so I switched to a booklet to ensure I had enough space to add all the important information such as what is a stroke?, types of strokes, rehabilitation et cetera, this also ensured that I had enough space but also to create a sense of hierarchy by using the negative space.

Tutorial with David

I had a tutorial with David to discuss my current progress on certain projects I wanted to discuss. I wanted to discuss my current progress on the Design for Real Life – Stroke project. I have developed my outcomes considerably by being more experimental and taking on the feedback I was given previously. I showed a variety of outcomes and David seemed to like the ripped imagery, just to make the posters more disjointed, use other imagery I have used and to experiment more with hierarchy.

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